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I'd been Duped

On the pretence of making my face look scary for Halloween, the girl I liked more than anyone had tricked me into making me look like a girl.... and used Semi Permenant makeup that wouldn't come off for weeks, and shes gone off with her jerk of a boyfriend and left me looking like this.

I didnt realize that I had left the front door open while I was staring at myself in the mirror until a voice came from that direction,

"Hello, Hello, is anyone home?"

I turned in utter fear, someone was going to see me looking like a girl, 

"Hi" the voice said "I'm Sally, you must be Marisa, we just rented the house next door"

Say what? Mom and dad had rented our house while they were away? Of course they had, why wouldnt they make some money while they were on vacation, I was staying at Marisa's house so no harm done, as far as they knew, except they didnt know their son now looked like a girl....... How was I going to get my clothes now?

Then it came back to me.... "You can borrow any of my things while I'm away...."

I looked nothing like Marisa and I couldn't risk anyone that knew Marisa coming to visit, so I said I was her cousin visiting from out of town "Actually you just missed Marisa," I said, "she just left with her boyfriend for a few weeks."

"I'm sorry to hear that" said Sally,

Sally was about my height with brown shoulder length hair and the most beuatiful green eyes, she kept staring at me, I thought the game was up and she would ask me why would a boy wear makeup? Then she said, "You have beautiful eyes, I hope you don't mind me saying that"

"So whats your name? she asked, I had to think fast, Omg she thinks I'm a real girl.... quickly, quickly, I was under so much pressure I just blurted out the first name I thought of, I told her my aunts name, "Emily, my name is Emily"

Just then while Sally and I were all caught up with each other, Tom, my friend arrived, this was going to be embarrassing, "Hello" said Tom "Who are you guys?"

"I'm Sally and this is Emily" said Sally, I was waiting for Tom to start laughing and pointing at me, "Hello Sally, "Hello Emily, my name is Tom," he shook my hand with a gentleness I didnt think he was capable of, "I'm here to see my friend Roger"

We all just stood there staring at each other, then I realized they were waiting for me to make a move, after all they were in my house now, and they were just guests, "Wanna a soda?" I asked, Tom who was trying to be the big man said, "Don't you girls have anything stronger?"

Sally giggled and I joined in, "No sorry Tom we just have soda" I said in my best girlie voice, Tom wouldn't leave until he got fed up of waiting for "Roger" so the three of us got to know each other better, then Tom said, "Why dont we go to the mall?" Sally was all over that, she was new in town, and couldnt wait to see what they had to offer clothing wise.

I tried to beg off saying. "I had nothing to wear,"  I was still wearing my own clothes, I must have looked like a flat chested tomboy, (Hey dont judge me Ive only been a girl for two hours)

"Girls always say that," said Tom, "I'm sure you must have something to wear upstairs" said Tom, I wanted to tell Tom to mind his own business, but Sally grabbed my arm and said she would help me pick something out.

When we got to Marisa's room it was like a foreign land to me, Sally went straight for the closet and started pulling things out for me to "try on" we were only going to the mall so I didnt want her to pick out anything outrageous and believe me there was enough things in Marisa' closet that I would have loved to see her in, but not on me thank you very much..... 

Sally handed me a pair of black shoes with a small heel but I still had trouble walking in them.... how do girls do this?

I had to tell Sally that the reason I had trouble walking in these shoes was that they were new and hurt my feet a little. When we came back down stairs Tom said, "Wow you look great lets go"

What next, my best friend thinks I look great

This is what I ended up wearing for my first and hopefully only trip out as a girl.....

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Could it get any worse? YEAH!
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charlee718 Featured By Owner May 19, 2017
it looks ok to me
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner May 22, 2017
Yeah but maybe not to him.
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ShinPersonaMaster Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Great chapter.
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017
Thanks
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ShinPersonaMaster Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
You are welcome.
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ederty Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2017
I love it
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2017
Thanks for the comment I appreciate hearing what people think
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JamesM1984 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Nice story 
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2017
Thanks James
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shoujodana Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2017
Nice story
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2017
Thanks Martin, I hope you are well.
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shoujodana Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2017
I'm good....  Looking for inspiration for a story
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2017
Need any help?
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shoujodana Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2017
I saw the Salon Bondage pic and it has inspired me.  Thanks so much
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LoveLatex64 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2017
Can't wait!
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2017
I saw that picture, it was screaming at me to write a story.
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LoveLatex64 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2017
Now I'll be honest, I can't tell if this is a picture of a boy trying to look like a girl, or a real girl with a boy cut. I tend to believe the latter, she's just too pretty.
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2017
You never can tell these days, but it needed a story.
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