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My name is Jay, and my sister is Julie, I am 17 and she is 18, we have always been inseparable, when we were in school, if either one of us was getting bullied we would gang up on them, I can't tell you the number of times we saved each other from a beating lol. It was the summer holidays and mom and dad had to go visit my aunt, she's not been doing too well since she was in a car accident, don't worry she will be ok, I have been sent home from drama school so my sister wont be on her own, I've been at the school almost nine months now, doing quite well by all accounts 
(according to my teachers)

Mom and dad left for my aunts this morning, as I arrive at around 2 pm, Julie doesn't know I'm coming, so it will be a nice surprise for her, unfortunately for me, the surprise is mine, when I get there, I find my sister and her best friend at the house, Julie is crying and Sue is trying to comfort her,

"Surprise, I'm home", I shout as I enter the house, But its Sue who has answered the door, so I am taken a little aback, First thing she sees is my hair, hey listen, I'm a student living away from home, when its a choice between getting your hair cut or eating, I choose eating everytime ha ha.

"What's up Sue?, where is Julie?" I ask, "She's in the living room crying, she thinks Sam is seeing other girls behind her back" Says Sue.

Sam is the quarterback for the local school football team, he's a typical jock, thinks he can pull any girl in town, its only a small town so he's probably right, but if he is, he's messed with the wrong girl, I try to console her but its no use, she goes to bed later, tired out with crying, I tuck her into bed, and go back down stairs to Sue.

Me..... "I'm not having this Sue, I'm going over to his house and give him a piece of my mind"

Sue....."You can't Jay, you have no proof"  She's right, he would just deny it,

Me..... "But I have to do something Sue, I cant just let this go"

Sue....."We have to trick him in front of Julie, but he's dated almost the entire town"

Me....."So we must get someone from out of town! Go home Sue, and come back tomorrow, try and come up with a name we can use"

Sue arrives back around 8:30 am, Julie came down stairs and joined us for breakfast, she had calmed down and is now just angry, I ask Sue, if she has come up with a name of a girl we can use to trap Sam into showing his true colours, she looks at me and says sadly that she hasnt, "He knows all the girls in town,"she says, "Even if we find someone he doesnt know, how can we talk her into doing such a thing"?

Me....."This is so frustrating, I would do anything for you to catch him with another girl Julie"

Sue..... "Anything"?

Me..... "YES ANYTHING" "No one treats my sister like that"

Sue....."Will you come to the salon tonight after we close"?

Me......What do you have in mind"?

Sue.....I think I may have found the girl we're looking for, If your willing to do anything, just come tonight"?

Me....."I'll be there, what ever it takes, maybe you can do something with my hair"

Julie and I get to Sue's salon about 3:00 pm they close early on Sunday, I see Sue inside and knock on the door, Its a world I'm not used to seeing, She ushers me to a chair and says "Lets get started"

She washes my hair and puts some crème on it, it must be conditioner or something but its very thick, I ask her "So who is the girl you have in mind"

Sue.....Let me finish your hair then we can talk"

After about an hour she washes  the "conditioner" out of my hair and brushes it straight, I cant see anything because she has covered the mirror with a towel, as she starts to cut my hair, then blows it dry, I ask again about the girl,

Sue....."Well she's about your height, about your build, wavy blonde hair, because we know Sam likes blondes"

Me.....Is she stacked, he will go for a girl that's got a good rack"

Sue....."She can be if we want"

Me....."What do you men "if we want"?

Just then Sue takes the towel off the mirror to reveal my face, my jaw hits the floor, She has coloured my hair blonde, and cut it to a girl style, combed to one side at the front, and wavy at the sides.

Sue....."Don't worry if you don't like the idea I can give you a buzz cut no one will ever know, but if its true what you say, that your willing to do ANYTHING then this is the girl for us"

Me....."Your crazy I could never pull it off"

Sue....."I thought you were going to drama school, If Dustin Hoffman can do it then you can"


Look at me Sue, my hair looks amazing but I couldnt pass for a girl here, never mind face to face with Sam.

Give me an hour, then decide, if you think you dont look like a girl then we can buzz you hair and take the make up off

She started by piercing my ears which I was'nt planning, two gold hoops were attached to my lobes, Then she arched my eyebrows just a little incase I changed my mind, she told me we can make them better if we decide this is a go, next was the powder, blusher, false eyelashes, I had to keep my head very still while she did the eyeliner, nothing too heavy just subtle, and to round it off, Baby Pink lipstick, When Julie came into the front part of the shop again she asked "Where is Jay, did he leave?"

You can stop joking Julie, I'm right here, Julie put her hand up to her mouth,  

Julie....."Is that you Jay?

Me....."You couldnt tell really"?

Julie....."I swear on Toby's life" (Toby is our dog, I knew she was serious)

Sue....."Dont jump the gun here Jay, you still have a long way to go before you take on Sam"

We walked home from the salon, just three girls walking down the street, no one staring, pointing, or worse laughing, I was gaining confidence every step I took, We got back to the house,

Julie....."Did you leave the light on Jay," 

Me...."I dont think so, maybe"!

Julie opened the door and we walked in to be greeted by,

Mum....."Hello honey, have you been out with your friends"?

Julie....."Er yes just down to the ice cream shop"

I guess it was the best she could come up with

Mum....."And who is this"?

Julie....."Its a friend of of Jay's, he couldnt make it, he had a test or something, so he sent "Sandy" in his place"

Mum....."Hello Sandy, Its so kind of you to come here and look after Julie for us"

Julie.....Wheres Dad"?

Mum..... "He decided your Aunt didnt need both of us, so he stayed" 

Sandy.....''Thank goodness"

Mum....."What was that dear"?

Sandy....."I said thats a shame, I hope she gets well soon"

Mum....."Where is your case dear"?

Julie....."She didnt have time to pack mum, I'm going to let her wear my stuff"

Mum....."Well at least we can buy you some new underwear tomorrow"

That was it in a nutshell, my forseeable future tied to being "Sandy"


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charlee718 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2018
Reading this for a second time it is still gets your attention
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2018
Thanks charlee
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charlee718 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2017
good idea to make jay sandy hope he injoys him self
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JohnFromJersey Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2015
I like where this is going.  I'd love to be made over like that
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2015
Unfortunately John I'm am forced to be en femme 24/7 so don't say you would like that unless you have been there.
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charlee718 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2017
i would like to be there atleast i could be my self
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2017
One Day 
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JohnFromJersey Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2015
wow...  forced?  I don't know if I'd like that or not.  I was 'forced' once at age 14.  But that was only temprary
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2015
Im not keen on it myself, lol
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JohnFromJersey Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2015
can I ask how it happened?
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2015
Its a long story


I was born in Hong Kong in 1974, I am 5'5", I know not very tall! I have shoulder length black hair, My girlfriend is English, born in 1976, she is 5'4", and works at the Casino here in Niagara Falls as a waitress.
Her father is a high ranking officer in the Canadian army, we don't get along at all, he's not a racists he just doesn't think I'm good enough for his daughter, I am a Civil Engineer by trade. This all started with me having a wondering eye for other girls while out with Michelle, she thought I should be taught a lesson In what it takes to be a woman and how much trouble she takes in her appearance.
One day she told me we had been invited to a party,(fancy dress) All the guys would be dressed as girls and all the girls dressed as guys, She was wearing my suit when she told me this and her friend (Sue) was here to help her get me ready,( Sue works in the movie industry in Toronto) RED flag there duh.
After much arguing I was persuaded to go along with it all, first they shaved all the hair on my legs and arms, my finger nails and toe nails were painted,(Red) what else!
then Sue went to work on my face, powder, paint, mascara, the lot, I had my ears pierced a long time ago so no problems there, Dangly earrings attached.

In my defence, Michelle told me there was a prize for best costume, and now being out of work for 2 weeks, I NEEDED the extra money.
Now comes the biggest problem, Michelle tells me I wouldn't get into any of her dresses, so I would have to wear her uniform from work???
Yes I know I should have ran for my life, but dressed as I was where the heck could I go?
Her uniform for work left nothing to the imagination, but as M said all the other guys would be dressed by their girlfriends/wives, So if we had even a remote chance of winning we had to go the extra mile. So she started with the black seamed pantyhose, then!!!!
I have never, in my life, felt the pain of her corset around my waist, it was squeezed to a minute 26", then the skirt, which was no more then a Tu Tu. Sue then went to work on my hair, If I'm honest, she did an amazing job, but I wasn't about to say that, to top it off she placed a large black bow in the front of an enormous bee hive of hair 
The corset was stuffed with what Sue called (Chicken filets)??? what ever they are?, but they looked about a 34" B. It was then that she approached me with her towering 4" black High heeled pumps, I told her straight "No way" was I going to be able to walk in those.
As it happened I never had to, that night. 

Thanks for your time, I hope it wasnt too boring.
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charlee718 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2017
it is intrasting
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2017
Thanks you
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JohnFromJersey Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2015
wow....  it's even more amazing that it's true
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2015
The rest is my "non fiction" section of my gallery
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sallyane Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2015
brilliant love this cap well done what a way to end up for helping your sister
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2015
This is just the begining for "Sandy" ha ha
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sallyane Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2015
it will  be great to watch what happens in thefuture
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2015
Shes all yours lol
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creepyponylover Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2015  Student Artist
I can totally relate to this, my little sister is still to young to date but the bullying thing. Man, we've done that more times then I can count. The last few lines just cracked me up though, great job!

My siblings and I may fight, but you put one finger on them and I swear your going to be on the ground in a matter of seconds because we're there for each other from cradle to grave.
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2015
I think a lot of families feel that way but you can go too far as Jay did, but then where would my stories be without them lol
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ShinPersonaMaster Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
How nice. good work.
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2015
Thank you I hope you enjoy the rest
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ShinPersonaMaster Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Okay, trying to read them, though i got occupied.
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015
Understood please read at your leisure 
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ShinPersonaMaster Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
:D Caught up!!
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015
Good for you
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ShinPersonaMaster Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
:)
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2015
So glad when your in your happy place
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ShinPersonaMaster Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
:D Caught up!!
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Justforalittlewhile Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh wow, Well written my friend ^.^
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2015
Truly high praise coming from you, thanks
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Justforalittlewhile Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome =)
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ZephyrStranded Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2015
I love this.  This is hilarious and fresh and fascinating all at the same time.  Will there be a sequel?
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2015
Im working on it right now lol, gald you enjoyed it
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ZephyrStranded Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2015
Anytime! it was fresh :)
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2015
Your welcome, and with your ideas im sure you will enjoy pt2
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ZephyrStranded Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2015
:D yay!
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2015
Ha ha  its nice to have so much feedback
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ZephyrStranded Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2015
I bet :D
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MegaPower124 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2015
Is there going to be a sequel?
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2015
Yes is there anything you would like to happen?
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ZephyrStranded Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2015
is there?
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MegamanMaster64 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing story. Very well written.
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2015
Thank you how very kind of you to say
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MegamanMaster64 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing story. Very well written.
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2015
Pt2 on its way, hope you enjoy it as much.
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KatieMatie Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2015   General Artist
Is this some kind of fetish? 
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2015
Did you enjoy/hate it?
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2015
No its just a fictional story, where a loving brother, trieds to help his sister with a boyfriend problem, then things take a turn for the worst.
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