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My girlfriend (Sue) and Billy have been going toe to toe with each other for 3 months now, Billy has me trapped as a bridesmaid, after I played him by switching costumes with my girlfriend at a halloween party, she was Alice in Wonderland and I had the Mad Hatter costume, “When Billy kissed Sue it made me so mad, I was determined to get my own back, so I switched costumes with Sue, but he figured it out and put something in my drink so it looked like I had drunk too much, then he took me home to his house and told his mom that I was his new girlfriend, and threatened to show pictures of me to all my friends, his sister Ann had had an accident skiing so Billy’s mom has asked me to be a bridesmaid instead of Ann because we were both the same size, his mother liked the idea that he had finally settled down, but warned him if he didnt start behaving she would send him off to military school just like his brother, so he was under threat of that while my girlfriend Sue wouldnt let him get the better of her by forcing me to go along with this charade until Billy backs down.

Thats the story so far.

As I stare into my bouquet of flowers, sitting in my bridesmaids dress, I start to apply my eyeliner, I have become pretty good over that last three months with makeup, my girlfriend Sue used to do it for me but she got fed up after three weeks so I had to start applying it myself, as I looked down at the Taffeta dress im wearing, Billy comes into the room, he sits next to me and I expect him to start laughing at me as I apply my lipstick, “You know this could have been over weeks ago if your girlfriend wasnt so stubborn, I told her I would back off but she wanted me to say that I was a loser and she had won”

“I tell him I know its her and not him that’s forcing me to do this”

Then he surprises me by saying, 

“You look real pretty today”

My hair has been done by a salon where all the bridesmaids had their hair done, it feels so heavy and while im having my pictures taken for the wedding I almost lean over too far, billy leans back just in time to catch me before I fall off the bed, we lock eyes and for just a few seconds it feels real strange.

Sue comes in the room and shouts “Whats going on here?”

Billy helps me sit straight again, and turns to Sue and asks her “Listen Sue cant we call this off I think your boyfriend has been through enough, I mean look at him”  

“Its not over Billy until you admit your a loser”

Billy looks at me and says, “I tried Cameron”

The wedding goes off without a hitch with lots of boys wanting to dance with me, I dont think Susan even noticed, as one dance would finish another dance would start, I was starting to get dizzy, then I heard “May I have this dance miss”

As I turned to take my next spin around the dance floor I looked at my next dance partner, It was Billy, I was going to walk off the dance floor but something stopped me, Billy wasnt laughing he wasnt joking around as he held my waist we looked into each other’s eyes as we danced, I couldnt believe it I was falling for the guy I hated most in the world and stranger than that, HE was falling for me.

He was such a gentleman I couldnt grasp what was happening, he led me back to my chair and said, “ I wasnt joking before when I said you looked pretty, I love your hair and your eyes, and your lips, and he kissed me, I couldnt believe it, Billy Thompson kissed me, and I didnt hold back either, as our lips separated he reached into his pocket and asked if a I would accept a friendship ring, I was stunned, he held my hand so gently and placed the ring on my right hand, “We will have to keep this a secret for a while if thats ok with you” I nodded,

I was dating Billy Thompson

I wont lie, it was exciting hiding our love from everyone especially Susan, but after the summer and Susan was still forcing me to even go to school as a girl, the bond between Billy and I just grew and grew, no one believed Susan when she told everyone I used to be a boy, she had done such a good job making me look and act like Billy’s girlfriend she was the outcast and had to stop with all the lies about me.

Two years later after we graduated Billy and I were married and we asked Susan if she would be MY bridesmaid, lol
After reviewing I hate Billy, I did leave the story without an ending so here it is.

This is the last part to I hate Billy, please read parts 1-2-3-4  first.
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charlee718 Featured By Owner 5 days ago
To bad that there was no pictures of Susan as a bridesmaid
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner 5 days ago
The top picture is her in a bridesmaids dress Charlee
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charlee718 Featured By Owner 5 days ago
OK
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charlee718 Featured By Owner 5 days ago
I love happy endings like this
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner 5 days ago
I know you do
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charlee718 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2018
I wish that i could be transformed into a woman so i can be happy also
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2018
Magic wand appear.
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charlee718 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2018
I love the story and i would be so lucky
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2018
Billy would be lucky to have you sis
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LoveLatex64 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2018
Yep, good ending! Love the picture :-)
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2018
Sometimes the picture writes half the story
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LoveLatex64 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2018
Lol. I should try that sometime ;-)
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2018
It does help those of us witout your imagination to visualize what your writing.
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LoveLatex64 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2018
Lol! I take that as a compliment. If only I could do my plots like you... ;-)
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2018
It was a compliment silly, now picture me doing a curtsy
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LoveLatex64 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2018
So was my comment ;-)
Curtsies back... oops
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2018
Look at us silly girls
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SubTommy6 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2018  Student Writer
Nice...  What a sweet story
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2018
Not really my style, but la di da
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