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"What have you done to me you fiend," was all Michael could say, he could hardly stand and had to hold onto the wall, he wondered why the inventor hadn't pushed the button to make his voice say what he wanted it to say, but he didnt push the question.

Michael didnt get much sleep last night, Oh his eyes were closed but the constant movement of his arms and legs and even his body prevented him from sleeping, his eyes remained closed until the inventor opened them with the push of a button on his ipad, as Michaels eyes opened he had to react to the bright light in front of him, as another flash went off indicating another picture was being taken.

"I can change it to something else if you dont like it, maybe a ballerina outfit would make you happier?  No, I didnt think so, maybe another day" said the inventor, "And technically, you did it to yourself, with a little help from my assistant, and the motors I inserted in your body, don't you like it? I thought it was rather elegant, I love online shopping dont you?" Since your body is now finsihed, well pretty much anyway, I thought you would get a kick out of this part, this is where you get to try out all the pretty outfits I have picked out for you, most women love this part."

"Yes, but as you well know I'm not most women am I?, I have no control over what I say or do unless you give me that control, like now, you have let me have control of what I'm saying but you have control of everything else, Right?"

"Thats right Michael, I'm glad to see you understand "WHO" is in control here"

Michael started to tell the inventor just what he thought of him while he had control of his voice and mouth,

"If I ever get out of this" he started to say, but the inventor pressed a button on the ipad, and began to walk away, Michael ended the sentence by saying," I would love to try on the pretty white lacy dress, the motors started to do their work. "If thats what you want Michael, then so be it," the inventor left the lab and returned 15 minutes later to see Michael in the white lacy dress, Michael was holding the hem of the dress and curtseyed for the inventor.

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"I've been thinking, and Michael just doesnt seem the right name, would you like to chose another more feminine name? I chatted with some of my friends on Deviantart.com and they came up with some very feminine names, why dont you choose."

Miley,
Mari,
Miranda,
Missy,
Michelle,
Mary,
Megan,
Melanie,
Or Monique?

The inventor was playing with Michael, he had already chosen which name to call him, he gave control of Michaels voice back to him, Michael started to talk realising he again had control of that part of his body,

"I hate them all" he said, regaining control the inventor said, "I agree, Monique it is then" The next six weeks were hell for Michael, Oh sorry Monique, (I dont want the inventor getting mad at me) He forced "her" to try on every dress and outfit he had bought her on line, Monique tried with all his strength but the motors were just too strong, the ulitmate humiliation for Monique was when the inventor noticed "her" trying to tear one of the dresses he had "her" try on, "So thats the game you want to play is it Monique, well lets see who is in charge shall we?" with that he brought out the outfit Michael feared the most. "And wear the blonde wig and tiara "Bella," That was the name he gave Michael when he wanted to emasculate him the most, I have given you back your voice, just call me when you want to wear any of your other dresses."

Michael knew this wasn't a battle he was going to win, but he was determined to not give in too easily, Two days later, he called the inventor...............

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charlee718 Featured By Owner Edited Apr 11, 2017
poor monique she has no choice but to give in i love that white dress
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2017
I like the purple one myself
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charlee718 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2017
yes i like thepurple one also
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charlee718 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2017
so far i like all the dresses it is hard just to pick one
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2017
So pick more than one ha ha
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charlee718 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2017
i pick them all and happy easter
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2017
Happy Easter to you too darling
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ShinPersonaMaster Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Poor "Monique". How far did the doc change her? On a scale of 100 where would "she" fall at this point?
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2015
He still has his bits, so 80/20
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ShinPersonaMaster Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Ah, okay.
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Jaybird196 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2015
Man, am I hoping the inventor (the character) dies, or at least, suffers some other severe consequences -_- .
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2015
Poor guy, maybe he will come good in Pt 6?
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Jaybird196 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2015
Having read pt 6, it doesn't look that way :( .
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2015
Or not
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butterblader Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2015
Is there going to be another please
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2015
I think there may be.
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JohnFromJersey Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2015
such pretty outfits...  and what a beautiful name she has (lol).  I so love this story.  Perhaps the Inventor could use a maid around the lab?
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2015
Hmm a maid eh!
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JohnFromJersey Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2015
maybe...  I've always been partial to a frilly french maid's uniform
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2015
BIG shock there then, ha ha
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JohnFromJersey Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2015
true....  I LOVE frilly.  What can I say
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2015
Pictures? ha ha
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JohnFromJersey Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2015
as you wish
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2015
I wish.
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MegamanMaster64 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Great job
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2015
Thanks Mega
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MegamanMaster64 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Always
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2015
Always? wow
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MegamanMaster64 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Your work will never bore me.
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2015
Thanks Mega, that means a lot, not enough people comment these days, they think a fave is enough.
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