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Monique and the inventor have been married for 2 months now, Michael hasn't been allowed to speak, only Monique, so life has been quiet at the house, until one day when the inventor asked Monique to come with him to the kitchen, "I have a surprise for you my dear"

"What is it? i hope its more jewellery, you know diamonds are a girls best friend" said Monique,

"No my sweet its not a thing, its a person" Monique had been paraded around the town like a trophy wife, Michael hoped this new person didnt look at him the way other men had done, the inventor didnt dress Monique slutty in any way, he could have, but in fact Michael was very surprised how classy the clothes were that the inventor had asked him to wear.

'Who is it my darling husband?" said Monique,

"If you must know I've hired a housemaid, she will lay out your clothes and do your laundry and anything else you might ask her to do"

As Monique turned the corner to enter the kitchen, she almost fainted,

"May I introduce your new house maid" said the inventor,

The new maid curtseyed and said, "Good morning ma'am, very nice to meet you"

"Oh my Goodness, its Kelly"

It was Michaels daugther, he ran over to her and gave her the biggest hug he can ever remember giving her, he was so glad she was ok, he had so many questions, but they would have to wait, he didnt want to freak her out. Kelly was shocked by the reception she received from her new employer

"Yes my dear, her name is Kelly" said the inventor, "Ok Kelly you can return to your duties"

"Yes sir thank you sir" was Kelly's reply

Michael summoned all his will power, he had never been able to overcome the motors that made him speak as a woman and not be able to say the things he wanted to say but as his will power grew, he approached the inventor and in a grating, rough kind of voice said,

"If you do anything to her, I WILL KILL YOU"

The inventor was taken aback, but told Monique, he had no intentions of harming Kelly in any way, that he had found her and brought her to the house, so Monique could be happy and grateful, then completely out of the blue the inventor released Monique from the control of her speech so she could say whatever she liked, Michael was shocked by this, he had told the inventor what would happen if Kelly was harmed, there didnt seem to be anything else to say, Michael only uttered two words,

"Thank you"

The inventor had found Kelly, and offered her a job as a housemaid, with a paycheck high enough she couldnt refuse, but not so high as to make it sound creepy or weird, Michael knew he had to be careful what he said to Kelly, if he said too much she would think he was crazy, and leave before he had a chance to explain.

Michael spent lots of time with Kelly, going shopping and lunches, not too heavy or out of the ordinary, slowly he got a picture of what her life had been like since she left home, Kelly would tell Monique about time spent with her father, and how he was verbally abusive to her, nothing she did was ever good enough for him, he would always run her down, even if she got an "A" in school her father would say,

"Whats the matter with you, couldn't you get A+?"

Michael tried his best to convince Kelly that maybe her father only wanted what was best for her, and maybe he wasnt as bad as you thought, but nothing would dissuade her from the feelings she had for her father, she said,

"If I never see him again it would make me very happy"

Michael was fighting a losing battle with his daughter but he took strength in knowing she was safe and he got to see her everyday, even if it was as Monique.

Michael accepted his fate and didnt fight it like he once did, he continued to work on how Kelly felt about her father but to no avail, Michael learned to live with his lot in life, he had his daughter back and that was all that mattered, wasn't it?

The inventor decided he didnt want his wife to be completely in his control, he felt it was like owning a robot, so he gave Michael control of his speech, Michael suggested it may be better if he kept his female voice.

Monique and Kelly became very close, and Michael knew he could do a whole lot more for his daughter as Monique, than he could as Michael, such as send her to university, keep her safe and as Monique hes pretty sure if hes a good girl she can persuade the inventor to pay for her tuition.

The End.
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charlee718 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2017
in a way a happy ending but also a sad ending becouse of the way kelly felt about her father
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2017
Yeah so 50/50 for happy/sad endings
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Jaybird196 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2015
Hmmm...kinda' bittersweet, this one (tilts head) :I .
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2015
Which part was bitter and which part was sweet?
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Jaybird196 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2015
Bitter: loss of bodily autonomy, being deformed by a psychopathic surgeon (to say nothing of being "married" to this person), coming to find out that it all happened because one went out to find out if a loved one was safe, only to find out that person intractably hates you.

Sweet: finding out that the one that you went through this nightmare for is safe, and now gainfully employed.
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2015
Perfect, I cant believe you got all that from my story, actually my story doesnt give enough credit to the explanation, great job. 
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ShinPersonaMaster Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
I second what Jay said here, and add it was a great story.
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2015
Thank you
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ShinPersonaMaster Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
You are welcome.
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Jaybird196 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2015
Thanks :) .
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MegamanMaster64 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah very nice end.
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2015
Thanks Mega not my style, happy endings, but what the hell.
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MegamanMaster64 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey I liked it.
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2015
Good for you Mega and thanks
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JohnFromJersey Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2015
Aww....  I love a happy ending
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SFC78767 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2015
Whoops didn't mean it end happily ha ha
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